Joel Achenbach, in his article Out of the Woods: Today’s Kids Can’t See the Forest for the MTV,
makes a plead to parents to get their children out of the house and into
nature. His thesis is that, “Children need to get in touch with their inner
animals.”, meaning that he wants parents to show their children how enjoyable
and good nature can be for them. He starts off the article by referencing a new
book, Last Child in the Woods, by
Richard Louv. He does this to bring in the reader’s attention and prove credibility
through the use of a legitimate source. From there he goes on to explain the
issue at hand: that the children of today have no desire or relation to nature.
He then continues by pulling the reader in farther by relating the Nintendo and
MTV society of today to the society that his intended audience grew up in. By
using this comparison between the society of today and the society that the
parents grew up in, he is able to help the readers understand the drastic
differences and the issues that come along with them. He talks about everything
from “lazy summer days” to his deciding to build a swimming pool as a child. He
uses these relatable experiences to help his intended audience understand the
situation. He finishes the article by explaining how he himself lives by his
thesis. He explains that he always does his best to get his children out of the
house-whether they’re helping him weed or going on a hike. Overall, this was a
well-written article that was not only credible, but also relatable and
interesting for his target audience.
English111-Allison Gottwald
Wednesday, April 4, 2012
Wednesday, March 7, 2012
Why You Should Own a Pair of Toms
In
2006, Blake Mycoskie founded a shoe company called TOMS. With this he also
founded his One for One movement. This meant that for every pair of shoes that
was purchased, Mycoskie would donate one pair of shoes to a child in need. This
movement is important because soil-transmitted diseases, which can get to skin
through bare feet, is a leading cause of disease in developing countries. These
shoes protect the children from getting cuts and sores, which are painful and
can lead to infection. It also helps the children get an education because, for
the most part, children can not attend school barefoot because shoes are a
required part of their uniform. If they cannot go to school, they cannot get
the education they so desperately need. As of September 2010, TOMS has given
over 1,000,000 shoes to children in need all over the world. TOMS are given to
children on an ongoing basis through their Shoe Giving Sponsors (humanitarian
organizations throughout the world who have teamed up with the TOMS company). They
also go on TOMS Giving Trips where people throughout the TOMS company go
directly to the countries in need and size and put the shoes directly on the
children’s feet. This is the main reason that I believe everyone should own a
pair of TOMS. Not only do you get a pair of shoes, but so does a child that
truly needs a pair. In addition, TOMS come in many colors and styles for you to
chose from. There are 12 different styles for both men and women and countless
colors and patterns that you can pick. Overall, TOMS are worth purchasing not
only for the comfort and style, but also for the impact that they have on
children in need all over the world.
Wednesday, February 29, 2012
Why the Music Industry Hates Guitar Hero
In Jeff Howe’s Why the Music Industry Hates Guitar Hero, he shows the need for
change in the relationship between the music industry and music videogame
companies. He explains that music videogames have become an industry of their
own by pulling in over $2.3 billion in the last three years. He also explains
that the music industry, specifically Edgar Bronfman who is the CEO of the
Warner Music Group has been fighting this newfound industry to attain more
money that they believe they are owed for the usage of their licensed music. It
is clear that this article is overall aimed at consumers-those who actually
purchase and use things such as the games in question and who also purchase
music. It is aimed at them to show and explain to consumers the problem and the
possible solutions for this war of sorts that is currently occurring between
the two industries.
Howe begins the article by making a
clear presentation of the problem at hand and presenting his argument that this
war is “a fight that no one can win”. He goes on to back his argument by making
a comparison. He compares this situation to what happened with Hollywood and
the VCR years ago, a comparison that the audience (tech savvy consumers who
read the magazine Wired, that this
article is featured in) will understand and be able to relate to. He then goes
on to suggest a potential solution-that the music videogames use cover version
of songs from the Warner catalog. However, he explains that CEO Bronfman has
already blocked this potential move out of fear that there will be a repeat of
when the record labels “got ripped off when MTV was sold in 1985” and then
again when Apple denied them control over pricing on iTunes. He goes on to show
that Bronfman’s feelings on the issue can be understood by making a comparison
to how the football league collects 30 percent of gross revenue on Electronic
Art’s Madden NFL (another comparison
that readers will surely be able to relate to). From here, he takes his final
stance explaining, “there’s better money to be made by playing together” and
proposes his potential solution. He does this by giving a fairly detailed explanation
of what he has in mind and backing it up with an example of a case study.
Overall, he explains and makes it
clear that this suggested reinvention would stop “petty haggling over fees” and
bring the music industry in to this century. He brings the reader in by showing
how important it is for a change between the two industries and backs it up
with relatable examples and scenarios. He brings it together by providing a
possible and reasonable solution, with information and a relatable case study
to back it up. Howe did an excellent job with this article.
Wednesday, February 22, 2012
Top 5 Reasons to Visit Italy
Out
of all the places I have been privileged to travel to, Italy has been my
favorite. There are five main reasons why I love Italy, and you should too.
First of all, for the cities and towns themselves. Each city and town has a
different atmosphere and it is interesting to see how the old and the modern
architecture come together. Rome, for instance, is full of bustling streets and
stylish shops but if you take a second to look around you can notice all of the
history that is has to offer (such as the forum, Palatine hill, and the
Colosseum). Every place you can visit has different and unique specialties to
offer. The second reason is for the food. Whether you go to a fancy restaurant
or a very inexpensive one, you will almost always be served a meal that is
delicious and was prepared with skill. For example, the pizzas are usually
baked in a wood-burning stove. The most famous pizza is the Italian Pizza Margherita,
which is named after the Italian queen and is meant to represent the Italian
flag (red is the tomatoes, white is the dough, and green is the basil). Another
of the best offerings is the gelato, which comes in flavors varying from
chocolate to tutti frutti. The third reason is the beauty. The landscape,
architecture, weather and style all help to make Italy such a beautiful place
to visit. The fourth reason is the shopping. Even if you are just
window-shopping, you will have a nice time. The quality of the window displays
is remarkable. From local shops and markets to famous designers such as Prada and
Jimmy Choo, there is a shop for everything and everyone. The fifth reason is
the people. It is fun to watch the
Italians go about their daily life with an air of grace. Even in the heat of
the summer in the city the men and women always look unruffled and elegant. Also,
their family values are something to really be appreciated. Overall, Italy is
really a beautiful place and it definitely deserves a spot on your travel itinerary.
(Above-Trevi fountain in Rome)
Wednesday, February 15, 2012
Hip-Hop Today
In Brent Staples’ How Hip-Hop Music Lost Its way and betrayed
Its Fans, he discuses why he believes that hip-hop/rap music is negatively
affecting society. Staples’ main goal with this article was to prove that the
rappers of today are not only negatively impacting the music and industry
itself, but also the fans. He goes about proving this by making a few main
points. The first point that he makes is that this problem initially started in
the 1990’s and shows through example that even deaths has not helped to stop
the industry from continuing to benefit from violent and poisonous things. He
goes on to prove his point by referencing the more recent rapper, 50 cent, and
the controversy and tension that has risen in the industry because of him. He
also references artists such as Jimmy Iovine and Dr.Dre. Through these
different examples, I believe Staples was really able to achieve his main goal.
He made claims and was able to back them up with facts and current news. In
addition, all of the examples that were given were of major recording artists
and legends in the industry. This was a good stylistic choice on his part
because although most people who chose to read it will be rap fans themselves,
other readers of The New York Times
may not be familiar with lesser known artists. This helped with the audience
awareness and credibility of the article itself. Each example that he gave were
good illustrations of the artists wide, and for the most part negative,
influences. They helped to lead up to his final conclusion. Overall, I believe
Staples did a good job of making his claim and going on to prove it, thus
achieving the overall goal of the article.
Wednesday, February 8, 2012
The tenth=The best
All fans of the show Doctor Who,
which originated in Britain but was brought to America through the BBC, know
that there has long been a debate over which actor portrayed the best doctor.
Having seen all of the episodes, I believe that David Tennant is the best
Doctor yet. David Tennant plays the 10th regeneration of the doctor
and I believe he does it best. Tennant, with some help through the excellent
stories written by Russell T Davies, has helped to increase the shows
popularity. The main reason that I believe he is the best is his emotions. He
has and shows so much vigor and passion, which helps to make the doctor more
lovable. This has also really helped to bring in a new generation, including
myself, to the viewing audience. In addition, he has such prowess to show
emotion, which really makes the show worth watching. This makes him a step up
from all of the doctors before him, and the one after him, because the rest of
them portray the doctor as a stoic, private person. He has shown these emotions
through many episodes, specifically those that involved the Doctor’s love
interests. Through the episodes the Tenth Doctor showed anger,
extreme sadness, helplessness and a glimmer of happiness. For example, in the
“Voyage of the Damned” Christmas Special, Tennant showed these great emotions
throughout, when he lost a potential companion Astrid Peth when she fought to
save his life, but through this sadness, he can change to the fighting hero all
fans knows, which reveals many different aspects of the Doctor’s character that
have not explored before. It is also through episodes like this one that we
find how much depth Tennant has added to the character, which helps to draw the
audience in and to relate. For example in the “Waters of Mars” special, Tennant
was able to portray the Doctor showing sadness for the first time. Tennant has
been able to show how complex the show and his character really are. Some
people say that Tennant as the Doctor is too over-rated and that he is just as
good as anyone else, but Tennant does deserve all the credit he gets because he
has enormous talent.
Wednesday, February 1, 2012
Facebook:Useful tool or threat?
Jacquielynn Floyd’s intentions are clear in her article, On Facebook, Biggest Threat to Your Private
Date May Be You. Throughout the piece, it is clear that her purpose is to
convince her audience that we need as a whole to realize that it is not safe to
put all of our personal information online through social media outlets such as
Facebook. Floyd is of the belief that we need to stop sharing on the Internet
and start sharing in real life. While her article discusses the main issue of
Facebook, it also includes worries about privacy online in general. While I can understand the concern for
privacy issues online, I don’t believe that one should shy away from social
media all together. While sites like Facebook can be used inappropriately and
incorrectly, they can also be used as excellent tools to connect with those
that do matter to you. Whether it’s for business, connecting with your family
and friends, or even reconnecting with someone you haven’t seen in years,
Facebook and similar sites can be used for good. Theses sites can also act as
good outlets for your creativity. It is all just really about how you go about
using these tools. It is in this sense that I do agree with Floyd. To quote
Floyd, “You are your own front line of defense in maintaining your privacy”.
This really rings true, especially today. While these social networking tools
can be used to your advantage, if used incorrectly they can be your downfall.
It is for this reason that we should continue to use these sites, but remember
to be careful of what we allow through the, “boundary between what goes on
inside and outside their skulls”.
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